Warborn

Nice one. Found some typos and some punctuation marks missing, though.

"New recruits, follow me; I'll be talking you to the training grounds; we don't have a moment to lose." Said a man you hadn't noticed before.

Taking.

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You're swords meet as you clash, it's a struggle for you both as you try to overpower the other.

This appears after choosing "That's easy I hit him... hard". Also, add a comma after That's easy, please.

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You take a more thorough look around the area and spot some of the different wares the vendors are selling, you're not sure as to why and how they are allowed to be here Then you realize they must be working for the military, most, if not all

There's a . missing.

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You are currently wearing Black pants

You look at all the pants they have to offer, and there's nothing exciting.

This appears after choosing to see the shoes.

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• Intelligence: 27

• Charisma: 12

• Strength: 36

• Dexterity: 34

Charming: 55
Appalling: 45
Comedian: 70
Soldier: 30
Impulsive: 45
Calculated: 55
Did you mercilessly beat Alister?: No, why the hell would anyone do that?

Barrowed money from Alister: False

Did you buy the potentially magical book?: Yes

What armor did you get?: You are not currently wearing any armor
Did you buy the combat knife?: Yes

Did you buy the bow?: No

Did you buy the shield?: No

I chose the free armor, IIRC.

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The sword is a very versatile weapon, you can slash, stab, and even bash people with the pomle.

Pommel.

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"Silas get up!" You hear a voice say as you are being shaken awake.

"Silas we got to get out of here." The person you can't quite see whispers.

Add commas after the PC's name and you'll be golden. 

this is really cool! with my limited experience using twine i find your use of the engine impressive. i'm excited to see the game develop further :D

Its a interesting concept and i like the feel it gives of an rpg, and the way u have written so far, however as is only the prologue, i cant give much more of an opinion than this;

Vincent of Cresthlot

Intelligence: 21

Charisma: 17

Strength: 38

Dexterity: 23

Charming: 55 Appalling: 45

Comedian: 60 Soldier: 40

Impulsive: 40 Calculated: 60

Did you mercilessly beat Alister?: No, why the hell would anyone do that? Barrowed money from Alister: True Did you buy the potentially magical book?: Yes What armor did you get?: Reinforced leather Did you buy the combat knife?: Yes Did you buy the bow?: No Did you buy the shield?: No

I would have liked a to customize the stats, but also feel its fine as is based on the choices so far

you used you're instead of your.  Otherwise it was good.  Wouldn't mind reading more.  Also, seemingly none of the stuff you warned about (dismemberment, etc.)